My long form sales letter (6 years copywriting experience) for your testimonial

[Ice Glass]

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Hi there,

These days you can find copywriters everywhere you look and for a wide range of prices too.

But how many of them can say they’ve worked with million dollar companies selling $6.5 million dollars’ worth of products?

Chances are… Not too many!

And the ones who can deliver that value are crazy expensive - which is fine for people who can afford them.

But what if you can’t afford to pay up to $10.000 for a sales letter, yet you need freaking amazing copy to scale your business or campaign?

Because honestly, the difference between a good campaign and a freaking amazing one is in the profits.

Nothing else really matters.

You shouldn’t care if your page layout is nice, if your website’s footer is user-friendly or not or if your significant other loves the product.

However, what you should care about is copy (and traffic, but I don’t handle that).

If it converts well, then you can scale your campaigns and win big. If it doesn’t… Your business could fail in the first few years.

“Yeah, you’re right, everybody would love to have more profits, what’s the catch?”

I Want To Make You An Offer You Can’t Refuse

But First, Here’s A Tidbit About Us

We’re a team of two highly-motivated direct response copywriters who traded their 9 to 5 office jobs to think and work outside the box.

We were someone else’s employees for 6 years, basically ghostwriting long form sales letters, landing pages, email sequences and promos, launching split tests and critiquing work for junior copywriters.

Fortunately, we’ve learned a lot from our rookie mistakes and years of failed launches, spammy headlines, and truth to be told – lame copy we’ve written in our first 1 – 2 years.

We got better and one lucky day (two different days actually, cause we’re two, lol) we separately wrote two offers that absolutely killed it, grossing more than $6.5 million in sales to date.

This is not hype or bragging. We have the proof and skills to back it up.

My partner has managed a 7-figure sales script in the health niche that generated over $5 million in less than 8 months… Doubling the conversion rate from her first copy iteration and tripling the funnel’s AOV with her copy plus the CRO insights she’s applied.

(She also lowered the refund rate from 14% to less than 5% with a super simple trick).

And I myself have created multiple offers for the health and survival niches… Breaking the million-dollar mark with one of them and generating tens of thousands of dollars with the others. Actually, I was very close to making another super winner when she quit my job.

So, after more than 6 years writing for the self-help, survival and health niches, we took the plunge, fired our bosses, and started from scratch.

We’ve joined our forces under one company, because we know we can take the lessons we’ve learned and apply them to businesses that need to scale fast and could use our help.

And right now, we handle projects we love and develop our own health offers on Clickbank after we’re done making money for our clients.

And if this is still not enough to convince you we are your go-to copy team, then...

Here Are 3 More Reasons Why You Should Choose Us

1. We are not some writers who call themselves copywriters for the heck of it.

We studied John Carlton, Chris Haddad, Gary Bencivenga, Gary Halbert, Clayton Makepeace and some other legends in the industry, for the past 6 years and still do. (Copywriting is a continuous learning process which is why we read at least one to two hours a day).

2. We are easy to work with and we appreciate constructive feedback and criticism.

We’re humble and always learning. This means we’ll never say no to your ideas. We value the time you invested in building your product /service and we promise to treat it like our own baby.

3. This is a super free offer taking into account the years of training, hard work and proven track record we both have.

We’re just launching the company, so we can’t wait to get kick-ass results for new clients before doubling our prices (and we will, because we like profits too!)

So if you, want us to:

• Write, critique or improve a sales page or sales letter that crushes the competition
• Improve your website with time-tested conversion rate optimization tips and tricks we’ve learned throughout the years…

Then we might just be a match.

We believe in lifelong partnerships and friendships.

Also, we’re copywriters with an entrepreneurial mindset that really understand direct response businesses in and out. We know you need results and we don’t shy away from hard work.

This means we won’t just hand over the script and then hide behind the laptop. We are in this for the long run – or until you’re 100% ecstatic with our work.

This is not a promise - it’s our standard.

So if this sounds like we might be who you are looking for to grow your business, then…

Here’s Our Offer

• 14 Day turnaround for a long form sales script (depending on the length of the script we can deliver it sooner)
• Amazing custom conversion rate optimization ideas that are proven to work from previous tests
• 100% professionalism (we work with deadlines too, so we are familiar with the ‘due yesterday’ concept)
• Unlimited reviews because we want you to be 100% happy with our work
• Free editing from a native professional

All for FREE in exchange for a review we can use on our website currently under construction, and the rights to put the work on our portfolio. You probably won’t get this offer anywhere else (remember, the best part about getting us on board while we are still starting out is that we won’t charge you the crazy amounts that other copywriters of the same level do).

What we don't want to write for in this JV...

• "Make money" offers
• SEO or internet marketing offers

What we DO want to write for in this JV...

• Anything else!

We've written for anything from astrology to ironing services to self defence classes. You name it, we've made sales for it!

So…

- If you’ve been daydreaming about monster conversion rates on your website…

- If you want your product to sell like hot cakes…

- If you want to be part of our dream of changing the world one word at a time, while making money in the process…

Then you won’t regret getting us on board for one heck of a ride.

However, for now, we’ve decided to take things slowly…

We can only take on 2 clients. We are not rushing into anything.

Instead, we want to take our time with the research process and deliver our best work.

This also means that unless you act now, you could wait weeks, even months until we become available again because once we start working with the first 2 clients, they really have all our focus and commitment.

So here’s what you can do:

PM me to schedule a 15 minute session Skype with one of us. Ask us anything about your most burning copy problem. You’ll have the chance to know if we’re perfect for the job again, free in exchange for your testimonial.

Worst case scenario, you won’t get your problem answered… best case scenario, we could come up with a powerfully converting sales letter that makes you $$$ fast.

So, if this sounds like a fair deal, just hit reply or PM me and make sure you get us on board while we are still available.

We’ll also answer any questions you might have about our process, skills and portfolio in less than 24hours.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

[California Kid]

so nice long form pre sales letter. unfortunately, i don't see where the jv is. you are preselling a service. this was also posted two years ago on the warrior forum...

https://www.warriorforum.com/warriors-hi...offer.html

this belongs either in the self promotion section or as a bso.

it's very fishy to me though how this same copy was posted two years ago on another forum. does this mean nothing has changed in 2 years? you mentioned your services and sales copy is ever changing

like all sales copy, this is vague and very misleading and doesn't cut to the chase in how this is a jv. all i read is you selling your services and want to meet with people for a 15 minute skype session to see if your services are a good fit for people or to see if they can afford your services.

you also say you refuse to help write sales copy for the "make money" niche? why is that? i noticed in your post history that you were in the biz op niche and wanted to jv with people in that niche.

[Ice Glass]

(10-26-2020 01:47 PM)California Kid Wrote:  so nice long form pre sales letter. unfortunately, i don't see where the jv is. you are preselling a service. this was also posted two years ago on the warrior forum...

this belongs either in the self promotion section or as a bso.

it's very fishy to me though how this same copy was posted two years ago on another forum. does this mean nothing has changed in 2 years? you mentioned your services and sales copy is ever changing

like all sales copy, this is vague and very misleading and doesn't cut to the chase in how this is a jv. all i read is you selling your services and want to meet with people for a 15 minute skype session to see if your services are a good fit for people or to see if they can afford your services.

you also say you refuse to help write sales copy for the "make money" niche? why is that? i noticed in your post history that you were in the biz op niche and wanted to jv with people in that niche.

To answer your questions:

Q: "i don't see where the jv is"

A: In the title - 'My sales letter for a testimonial'. Also repeated in the body copy "free in exchange for a review we can use on our website currently under construction, and the rights to put the work on our portfolio"

Q: "this was also posted two years ago on the warrior forum"

A: Yes it was (slightly altered), but that was a paid offer, this is a JV offer.

Q: "does this mean nothing has changed in 2 years? you mentioned your services and sales copy is ever changing"

A: In the OP, it says we are starting a new website and we're looking for testimonials in new niches to put on our website and portfolio.

Q: "doesn't cut to the chase in how this is a jv. all i read is you want to meet with people for a 15 minute skype session to see if your services are a good fit"

A: We'd talk on Skype about what service/product you want the free sales letter for. I also want to know the product/service/owner inside and out so that I know what I'm writing about (I also send them a brief to fill out). If we can do it and other party still wants it, we'll proceed. I wanted to simulate the usual client process which involves a live call. I've reworded to clarify, but if Skyping is a problem then we can talk by PM.

Q: "you also say you refuse to help write sales copy for the "make money" niche? why is that?"

A: For our portfolio's diversity, we want to write copy for new niches (hence the free offer in exchange for a testimonial) and because I don't want to just stay in the MMO niche

In summary, all we seek is to write 2 long form sales letters in 'normal' niches in exchange for 2 testimonials and to use the work in our portfolio.

[California Kid]

ok. my appologies! all those answers make sense to me and how you edited the new post(vs. warrior forum) to indicate new niches and thus new testimonials.

i scroll through this section because there is a lot of shady business going on in this section.

so all makes sense. if i was in another niche, i would definately take you up on your offer and i think anyone who doesn't may be missing out on an opportunity here in exchange for usage rights.

best of luck to ya. i hope you can help a couple people here with what you're offering!

thanks for taking the time in answering my questions

[California Kid]

one more question....

are you seeking people who have their own product or service? or are they able to be an affiliate and you write for affiliates.... or both

[Ice Glass]

(10-31-2020 10:23 PM)California Kid Wrote:  ok. my appologies! all those answers make sense to me and how you edited the new post(vs. warrior forum) to indicate new niches and thus new testimonials.

i scroll through this section because there is a lot of shady business going on in this section.

so all makes sense. if i was in another niche, i would definately take you up on your offer and i think anyone who doesn't may be missing out on an opportunity here in exchange for usage rights.

best of luck to ya. i hope you can help a couple people here with what you're offering!

thanks for taking the time in answering my questions

Kind of you to say so. I've seen your vigilance in other threads and I actually respect your efforts on here.

As for affiliates, while it's not something I've written much for myself, I don't see why not. That said, I've just filled the second spot and so I'll be locking this thread now. If you'd like to discuss a project with me, PM me and with no promises, I'll consider a possible 3rd spot if I have the time!

[drmia]

Is this offer still open?

[Ice Glass]

I've unlocked this thread because the person I gave the second slot to has since disappeared. That means there is still one slot available again.

Make sure you're seriously interested before PMing me please. Working with decent copywriters costs a lot of money, and I'm giving you my time and effort for free. Yes I'm asking for a testimonial at the end, but please respect that you're getting my time for free and please be responsive while we work together.

You will be given a set of questions to answer on a Word doc about your business and aims, which will help me to craft the perfect sales letter for you. If you're not willing to spend 10 minutes answering that, please don't apply. I'd also like access to your product or service so I can experience it myself, which also helps me write the best copy for you.

I may make a BSO out of this one day but really we're doing this for our upcoming website. So if you're still interested in the last remaining slot for free, PM me and we'll talk. Same conditions as before:

- No "make money", SEO or internet marketing type offers.
- "Normal" businesses like dating, yoga or piano lessons are perfect.
- A testimonial will be asked for at the end!
- We'll display the work we provide you on our portfolio

Here is the testimonial from the first person I helped with this JV (I haven't changed a word):

"I have a website that I wrote the copy for myself, several months ago. The copy has a fairly low conversion rate.

I talked to Sam, filled out his questionnaire and he got to work.

What I received was a document filled with tips and new copy. I've purchased copy in the past and usually all you get is your new salesletter. Sam goes above and beyond, giving valuable, actionable tips to help improve conversion rates.

The copy he wrote was also excellent. I feel that with my shiny new salesletter (and tips), I now have what I need to improve conversion rates.

Great job and highly recommended. I forgot to mention he did this all in record-breaking time. I've waited weeks for a new salesletter and he got it back to me in a couple of days.

- (name and website hidden)"

[Little Lulu]

Do you accept freelancing offer?

I'm a freelancer and offering/selling graphic ads and/or short video ads creation service.
I'm not an English native, so I want to eliminate this in my copy and want my prospect to understand that I still know English and am very able to communicate in English (mostly in text by email/chat), but yes I'm not native.
Also I want to use simple English to catch more prospects and customers who're not native like me.

If you can help me write a copy to fulfill my situation, I'd be glad to give it a try and provide a review for you.
Let me know and I'll PM you more details.

Thanks.
GBU.
:)
L.L.

[Ice Glass]

I'd rather write for a native English speaking audience, I'm sorry. But good luck.