Participating in a EDM producing Contest! Please rate my preview

[Mugiwara]

Hey whatsup guys,

Besides all that SEO stuff and sh*t I also have a hobby; producing.

By producing I mean producing EDM records like house, electro house, trance etc.

I am participating in a remix contest where I can win $1000 and a signed record @ spinnin' records (biggest edm label on the world!).

So I have made a part of the remix and want you guys to review it , if it has the potential to even win this contest. (never posted my work on a forum, so I'm very curious what you guys can say about it!)

This is my unfinished and raw track:


http://www39.zippyshare.com/v/50155103/file.html



At the moment the best which I have to put it up against in the competition is this one:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zfZMbJKrVxQ (not sure know if it's against the rules to post youtube urls :P)



Thanks!