06-22-2026, 09:31 AM
Hey guys,
I’ve been building a lightweight buyer-side scanner for IM offers and marketing copy, and I’d appreciate some honest feedback on it.
You paste in your sales copy, landing page copy, promo copy or emails, and it returns observations on where trust friction may start showing up from the buyer’s side.
The goal isn’t to grade the copy or rewrite it for you.
It’s more about spotting places where:
the claims don't seem to match the support behind them
urgency or pressure lands to hard for the relationship its developed with the buyer at this point
value stacking / bonus language starts creating over value claims (we all know what i mean, but i can explain it for 48$ even though its worth every cent of half a million)
the copy begins to feel “off” to a cautious buyer, even if the reason why isn’t obvious yet
It’s still fairly basic at this stage, but I’ll keep tightening it as I go.
If you want to try it, here’s the page:
https://problemvex.com/154-2/
Use it as much as you like.
If you do test it, I’d really appreciate feedback in the thread — especially if:
it catches something useful
it throws a false positive
it misses something obvious
or the framing is useful but the rules need work
For context, I’m less interested in “how do we make this copy more aggressive” and more interested in where buyers start to drift from initial trust to questioning validity of the product claims.
Thanks as always for the support and sharing here over the years. I just realized this is now a 13-year-old BBHF account and i have made a lot of solid people here and shared in a lot of real wins with the family.
– Danguy
I’ve been building a lightweight buyer-side scanner for IM offers and marketing copy, and I’d appreciate some honest feedback on it.
You paste in your sales copy, landing page copy, promo copy or emails, and it returns observations on where trust friction may start showing up from the buyer’s side.
The goal isn’t to grade the copy or rewrite it for you.
It’s more about spotting places where:
the claims don't seem to match the support behind them
urgency or pressure lands to hard for the relationship its developed with the buyer at this point
value stacking / bonus language starts creating over value claims (we all know what i mean, but i can explain it for 48$ even though its worth every cent of half a million)
the copy begins to feel “off” to a cautious buyer, even if the reason why isn’t obvious yet
It’s still fairly basic at this stage, but I’ll keep tightening it as I go.
If you want to try it, here’s the page:
https://problemvex.com/154-2/
Use it as much as you like.
If you do test it, I’d really appreciate feedback in the thread — especially if:
it catches something useful
it throws a false positive
it misses something obvious
or the framing is useful but the rules need work
For context, I’m less interested in “how do we make this copy more aggressive” and more interested in where buyers start to drift from initial trust to questioning validity of the product claims.
Thanks as always for the support and sharing here over the years. I just realized this is now a 13-year-old BBHF account and i have made a lot of solid people here and shared in a lot of real wins with the family.
– Danguy