After a long time again on the track with New Free E-book. The e-book I wrote. Download now and share your opinion here. I want to use your testimonial on my landing page (After getting permission).
Hope Everyone will enjoy the PBN E-book. At first, I wrote it for selling on Amazon Kindle. But Its FREE now. :D
Landing Page:
https://digitalvast.com/library/private-...ret-ebook/
Download:
Code:
https://s3.amazonaws.com/digitalvast/ebook/Method+to+Play+Without+Risk+by+Tafser+Ahmed.pdf
First of all, let me say 'Thanks' for sharing. You asked us to share our opinions, so here you go:
The layout is stylish but not really the way it should be done. White text on that orange/rust colored background is not easy to read and to complicate matters even more the size of the font is too small. People buy these products for the information - not for fancy layouts and graphics. Which leads me to the fact that your picture is on many of the pages. Why?
The next point is the grammar. It is obvious English is not your first language and I have no problem with that. However, if you want to sell a report in English you need to have it proofread. I see poorly written reports all the time from authors who are either too lazy or too cheap to have them edited and proofread. Your credibility and reputation are important or they should be. This report will NOT help you in any way.
Lastly, the content. Simply put - it is thin. 33 pages filled with graphics and very little text. One entire page says 'Coffee Break'. Why would I need a coffee break after reading 14 pages? If I had paid for this I would be asking for a refund in about 5 minutes.
Read some of the other courses on PBN's. (You can find many of them here on BBHF) The competition in this area is formidible. You need to step up your game if you are going to compete. Hope you find this helpful.
Cheers,
NoJob